THE CHALLENGE
There are multiple ways of interacting with silence: purposefully leaving something unsaid, breaking the silence around a topic, or, quite simply, getting tongue-tied. For this week’s challenge, we want you to take the theme of silence and explore it in your own way.
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For this week’s writing challenge I really tested myself. I did poetry, again. I’m beginning to like this! Eventually I will even get better at it. I decided to show my softer side, romantic, even some might say. It just came to me and I ran with it. Hope you enjoy what you read.
Silence
In silence we walk, hands clasped, fingers locked.
Slowly we make our way along the beach
Smiling softly, we walk close together
Shoulders touching as intimately as a soft kiss
In silence we walk, knowing words do not need to be spoken
For we talked all night before the dawn
We learned so much of each other during those hours
It plays back in our minds, in slow motion
In silence we walk, content within our hearts
Almost strangers, yet as close to each other as lovers
For we are getting there from our words to each other
From the night before
In silence we walk, our footsteps muffled in the sand
A wind surrounding us in its warm cocoon
The sun peeking over the water, golden rays sparkling
As the water flows and ebbs and covers our tracks
In silence we walk, content to be touching ever so slightly
It is all we need in this moment of quiet
Two old souls, growing close with words, not even spoken
Each smile, each glance, each kiss draws us in
In silence we walk, words have no place here
Not yet, soon they will make their noise
But for now we rejoice in the absence of chatter
Hands clasped, fingers locked, satisfied, for now
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This is excellent Jackie, you have captured the silence and importance so well. Those two old souls must be so lucky to have found themselves in this situation where words don’t have to be said but just to bask in each others presence. Beautiful.
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I do think those two old souls are lucky. I thought the poem came out rather well. So glad you enjoyed it.
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You did very well, you should write more. Old souls could be a source of inspiration to you.
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I just might, I’m finding I rather enjoy it.
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Simply exquisite. To think it “just came to you”. I especially like the 4th line: Shoulders touching as intimately as a soft kiss.
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Thank you! Sometimes things do just come to me. It’s nice though that it does. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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This is so lovely, Jackie. Yes, a soft, romantic side of you. I’m not surprised. You should definitely write more poetry. I wonder if you might intersperse poems throughout Unbroken. Something here and there that is pertinent but breaks up the seriousness of the book.
Just a thought. 🙂
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Maddie you are brilliant! That my friend is a great idea! I see what you mean, as Unbroken is rather intense, so the poetry would soften the blows a little. And it would mean so much more if it was my original stuff. Yes, you are so smurt! 🙂
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I’m so glad you like the idea. I really think you could write some amazing poetry for it.
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I really like the idea Maddie. Like you said it would buffer some of the intense stuff. Now I got my brain thinking. oh oh…..hahaha.
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One helluva lovely poem there JP 🙂 Didn’t get the ‘like’ button so couldn’t like…
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Thanks Torbs! Just took a look at your new WP home. Mighty fine. 🙂
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Can you hear me clapping? This is very good, Jackie!!
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Wow, thanks tiny! You are awesome lady!
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You captured the quiet intimacy of two hearts joined. Very nice.
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Thank you Kim!
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